pure art
pure art
THANKS 4 THE RESPONSE. THIS WAS A COMPLETE FREESTYLE FILLED WITH THE HOOK. THANKS FOR NOTICING!
this should totally be on the portal
*dying
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i meant to do that!
also 2 * y?
GREAT WORK! Very atmospheric, reminds me of dipping through alleys at night as a kid, you deserve more recognition for this piece! also where did you get those vocal samples btw?
Thanks a lot! Glad you like it! The vocal are done with Voice of Gaya "Strawberry" by Soundiron.
Another sexi future bass *w*
I like the ominous mood at the beginning and the melodies that come in at :12. It has a forlorn and distant feel to it, and I love the quirky instrument that you introduce at around :35 (and other places). I really admire your sense of harmony, especially around 1:20. I think you needed a smoother transition at 1:36. The addition of some drums might help with that. At the same time, 1:37 offered some important structural relief. The ending really threw me off, though. You should usually end your tracks on a tonic note, but instead this ending was simply inconclusive. This was especially disappointing, however, because the rest of the piece was rather impressive. Also, 2:55 was another spot where I think you needed a smoother transition. Overall, though, this is really solid work, and I applaud your effort here. Keep up the good work, Miguel-is-cool. ;D
9/10
Hey, thanks so much for the critique!! I'll go back and change it right now. I know I need to improve with transitioning and I've been working on that for about 12 years. I'm also really bad at making endings to songs because I never want the song to end..
I'll make the changes and update soon :)
-Moobella
World be alot better if you turned down your noise :)
Space is loud what of it?
Great work! very impressive melodic strings I'm really digging this good job!
Thanks! :)
intro reminded me of com truise "In decay" good job!
What a coincidence geez, but thanks!
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